frank_reintjes 0 Posted April 19, 2014 Thank you very much for your time and critiques! Link to comment
andresfaya 0 Posted April 20, 2014 I like how you have taken a subject which is seen for hours at a time and managed to turn it into an image.I think the objective here is to have some composition. What put it off balance for me is that the two stripes are not centered, but a little off to the right.I would try to either have them completely centered in a symmetrical way, or to do the complete opposite and to have one line coming out the bottom right hand corner and the other going into the top left corner. I like that you make me think and I will try to compose something on my own using my b&w technology.Thank you. Link to comment
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