single photos Contemplation

I'm working on my crops, body position, lighting ect.. and I would

appreciate some feed back on this piece. Thank you very much for your

time. =)

Not sure about the earlobe, and the hair might look better combed. Otherwise, the composition is good, as is the color. DOF is maybe too shallow? White balance seems a little blue/magenta.

Hi

The image catches your attention. I like the diagonal aspect and the eye contact. Personally I find it just a bit too tight and would like just a smidge more space, not a lot just a bit. This one is quite saturated compared with the other version. With the saturation bumped up you have catch lights in her left eye but none in her right eye making one eye seem dead in comparison. In the other version it's the same but not quite as noticeable as in this one. Perhaps a small reflector would help to kick a little light in to soften the shadows and contrast and hopefully add a catch light to the other eye. The white of her eye and the side of her face has a blue cast to it and I'd remove it. I did a rough edit to show what I mean. Others may have differing opinions, just my 2 cents.

Regards 
Greg