inna B G

Hello!

My critique would be around the following things:

1. The scene doesn' t seem `clean` . It has potential, but it' s missing something. One thing that distracts my eye, is the reflection of the hand being `blurred` by the dirt from the glass. It' s the grease from the hands (I think) . Could have been cleaned.

2. On the left of the photo, there' s the light source. It' s a yellow tint, breaking the black from behind the subject. My suggestion (thus not necessarily the best) , would be to remove the color cast and make it all black.

3. On the right of the photo, there' s a white line offset from her back. You could remove that as well (make it all black.

4. As far as the pose of the subject, I would have asked her to stand more on her left hand, fingers up, hand stretched and back arched (much harder, but I think the lines of the subject would benefit from it) . If you watch her back, it has two curves in it. I personally don' t think it helps with the photo.

5. The pose of the subject has potential, but it would be nice for the subject to look at the camera, into the viewers eyes in essence.

6. As a personal touch, I would have cropped more from the right of the photo, cropping the right (posterior) cheek as well.

All the best and take care!