Duet...

Not much to be critical of, except 'apples?'  Eggs I could understand, two other small points, whatever object used, clutching looks ugly.  Either lay them on a semi opened palm, or give the impression of caressing them.  I know pyjamas and creases in real life go hand in hand, but you are not picturing real life so get rid of them (the creases I mean).  On reflection maybe getting rid of their clothes could improve the impact no end.  "Whatever, keep on clickin'."