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to my taste the red girl with the umbrella shouldn't be there;  without her the image would be excellent.  With her in it looks weird.  Cheers, Micheal

For me it creates a different kind of balance.  I begin to wonder about the relationship between the two figures.  One dressed in a heavier black garment looking back at the viewer, the other in a red dress with an umbrella...both moving in opposite directions...one older perhaps, a bit weathered from age, the other, perky and youthful...the umbrella protecting from the ravages of age on the skin...the harvest?  nice work Mark...regards....David