Sunset Portrait

Too artificial-looking for me.

Hi
The thumbnail caught my eye. I like the idea here. Incongruous subject and setting. The flash at dusk makes her pop out in the frame. The red satin dress certainly draws the eye to the subject. As for my thoughts on possible changes. First I would say the power lines and microwave towers in the background are a distraction because they stand out and keep drawing my eye. I'm guessing you framed it this way to balance the composition but I think it would be better without them. I find the sky rather harsh and might soften it and take the saturation down and remove the green tinge. I might lighten the shadow under the chin from the flash. I guess a lot of this might be personal preference, just my 2 cents. I did an edit to show what I mean, a picture being worth a thousand words and all that.
Regards
Greg