sheyzar

Hi. I really like the pose and mysteriuous/dramatic/desperate mood that inheres this image. However, I am not a big fan of local saturation/coloring as I suspect has been done to her lips.

Hope you like my re-crop and re-toning.

Best regards, Alex

I agree with Alexander...the thumbnail caught my interest and it's a very creative shot but the lips to my taste, are too saturated...but then again, you are the image maker and that might have been your intention for a reason that makes sense to you...regards....David

Afsaneh.  I really like the image but agree with the other folks that the red lips are not necessary and in fact detract from the image.  Otherwise the tone and mood of the photograph are intriguing.  I also think that cropping the photo and including less negative space on the right might be interesting to try.  Dana...