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Capital Hill


jairo

All the manipulation on this picture was a little brightness/contrast adjustment in Photoshop.


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Hi. Constructive comments will not be taken for granted. Uplifting

ones would be regarded with a smile. Bashing will be welcome too as

long as you explain why. And thanks for looking.

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There seems to be some evidence of camera shake - things aren't as sharp as they need to be. There is a blown out hightlight on the rim of the tower. The dark corner in upper right is distracting. The composition isn't particularly interesting. I would have liked to see the statue silhouette given more importance (move in nearer and lower the camera) - I think if it had stood out in parallel to the building that might have been nice.

 

Sorry if that's been a lot of bashing - I am trying to be helpful.

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-Sharpness isn't there (shake or too much postproduction?): use a tripod, faster lens or faster film (it seems iso200 isn't enough here 800?)

-Light is strange (very dark on the foreground and very bright in the sky, I guess postproduction effect?)

-Some vignetting on the corners and side (the lens isn't performing well?)

-Composition isn't ideal: try to bring something from the foreground and put less sky

There's a bright white spot on the upper-right side of the building.

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