jairo 0 Posted August 14, 2003 Hi. Constructive comments will not be taken for granted. Uplifting ones would be regarded with a smile. Bashing will be welcome too as long as you explain why. And thanks for looking. Link to comment
dominiquedodge 0 Posted August 14, 2003 There seems to be some evidence of camera shake - things aren't as sharp as they need to be. There is a blown out hightlight on the rim of the tower. The dark corner in upper right is distracting. The composition isn't particularly interesting. I would have liked to see the statue silhouette given more importance (move in nearer and lower the camera) - I think if it had stood out in parallel to the building that might have been nice. Sorry if that's been a lot of bashing - I am trying to be helpful. Link to comment
jacques_weber 0 Posted August 14, 2003 -Sharpness isn't there (shake or too much postproduction?): use a tripod, faster lens or faster film (it seems iso200 isn't enough here 800?) -Light is strange (very dark on the foreground and very bright in the sky, I guess postproduction effect?) -Some vignetting on the corners and side (the lens isn't performing well?) -Composition isn't ideal: try to bring something from the foreground and put less sky There's a bright white spot on the upper-right side of the building. Link to comment
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