Work in Progress

Hi all

Here's a pic I took of a model back in March. The idea was to shoot a

Kawasaki Z900 but rain meant the guy couldn't bring it (it was showroom

condition) but one of the guys who worked at the yard brought along his

1938 Arial.

I asked one of the workman to grind some steel for effect and to give

some more depth.

Cheers

Mike

I'd simplify it with a crop. Too busy, too dark & too much contrast from her knees down. I don't think you're losing anything. At the same time you shift the focal point to the best part of the photo, her face & chest.