Viola in Summer

I know the left strap is twisted, too bad - I noticed it only after

taking this shot. The original is in color, but as I can't shoot in

full daylight (gives too much burned out skin areas) this one was

taken in the shade and hence didn't look very 'sunny'. What do you

think of this b&w version, tell me ! Thanks.

Nicely done

not enough space on top of the head. i would have cut it differently. More space on top, cropping at the bottom....

nice tones.

her right eye...I think you need to show more of it...I may be dead wrong

The character of the image is informal, but the position of the head is that of a posed shot (which I am sure it is) and makes the model look stiff.