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ummm. The focus is actually good on the eye netz which is the correct point. 1/3rd in front and 2/3rds behind will be and is in focus. But your picture would be better if you had more DOF. Light makes a picture and the effect. You will increase the DOF with more light and closing down more will give more DOF as well. I think you lens will close down to F32 or so. You must think about foregroud, midground and background lighting. If you want to see it you need to light it. Think about putting a background colour behind you scene and light it. The more light the more light zones. The background will be black. If you want to see it, light it. It will be in the out of focus area of the picture but needs separte lighting. Use some on camera flash to increase DOF on the subject and if you have additional lighting or reflectors bring in some side lighting background lighting. Check out the results the top Macro phographers on PN are getting you need to add some extra lights or techniques to get better results. Camera and lens are upto speed. Hope that helps.