Guest Guest Posted July 30, 2003 This looks awesome! Very good job. Did you use one light? I don't think it's too dark. I think the crop could be better, maybe try a landscape frame and put more black area in front of her face. I think this would make the impact of the image alot greater by given the face more room to breath. Just a thought. Maybe I'll hop on my photoshop alittle later and try to help you out alittle. 7/7 T.Page Link to comment
miller1 0 Posted July 30, 2003 Thanks Toby....This was taken in window light. I had it cropped the other way....couldn't decide which I liked better. I'm trying Adams framing technique...Let me see what you come up with...I appreciate your comments as I love your work. Elizabeth Link to comment
rwh1949 0 Posted July 30, 2003 I like it all, Elizabeth...the lighting, the mood, the expression, the framing. Nice. Very nice. Link to comment
Guest Guest Posted July 30, 2003 Just something I came up with. It gives the subject alittle more room to breath. Just my opinion. Enjoy! T.Page Link to comment
roberta_bagnacani 0 Posted July 30, 2003 Good work. I appreciate also the advice of Toby. Anyway...well done! Link to comment
miller1 0 Posted July 30, 2003 Cropping landscape mode gives it more mystery..is someone in the dark?, what is she looking at?? and so on...That's what this site is all about. I show everyone your Vodka photos & I wish you could hear their reaction..they love them...."how'd he do that??!!" is the most common comment. My answer "In his bathroom with lots of talent". lol Elizabeth Link to comment
cactus_bob 0 Posted July 31, 2003 Very nice. I like Toby's rule of one thirds cropping suggestion. But, it's great just like you have it. Link to comment
shootme 0 Posted August 1, 2003 I agree with Toby very good shot except in composition. You shoult try more space on the front. Link to comment
mia_friedrich 0 Posted August 1, 2003 i think it's perfect. I also like the presentation. Link to comment
ilya_abramnova 0 Posted August 1, 2003 Cropping and lighting are excellent, Good work! Link to comment
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