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She has a whimsical look and seems engaged in what she's doing, so there's definitely a story there.

The point of view could be more intimate - this feels too third-party to me. Try different perspectives, perhaps closer to the angle of the subject she's capturing, to mimic its point of view, or perhaps from more over her shoulder.

Watch your horizons - your angle to the wall makes it intersect her awkwardly, in my opinion.  Perhaps create more background separation with a more creative focus or exposure  - then the horizontal lines might appear more subtle.  Maybe incorporate more of the architecture at the top corner and less of the wall.

Keep shooting and have fun.

A beautiful result with very nice lighting, John!