fan dancers

would love any and all comments! thanks, doug

http://www.ricecracker.net

This situation had so much potential! The light and tonality are perfect; light subject on dark background. I think you should set the white point slightly lower (i.e., increase the contrast). This is all correctable a posteriori; now for the uncorrectable aspects. You can't see anyone's face; I want to see all three! You need have stepped to the left and crouched. The low angle would also have lent some drama.

There are other good photos in this folder.