Emotion 03

I like your intent and setting for this image with the model's pose and look.  Your lighting provides some attractive and dramatic depth to her figure.  The weakness I find in your image is that the eyes are pretty well hidden by the dark  shadows and with some light directed into them would make this image jump out at the viewer.  One minor suggestion is with the position of her hands, especially her left hand being hidden by the sheer drape and partially cut off at the wrist.  Perhaps having both visible and/or holding the fabric would look more pleasing.