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Artist: Marius Ioan Groza;
Exposure Date: 2013:01:15 13:52:09;
Make: NIKON CORPORATION;
Model: NIKON D7000;
ExposureTime: 1/640 s;
FNumber: f/5;
ISOSpeedRatings: 800;
ExposureProgram: Manual;
ExposureBiasValue: 0/6;
MeteringMode: Pattern;
Flash: Flash did not fire, compulsory flash mode;
FocalLength: 300 mm;
FocalLengthIn35mmFilm: 450 mm;
Software: Adobe Photoshop CS5 Windows;

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gregoryl

Hello Marius

A nice image of a colourful bird. I like the framing and timing. The pose is good with good detail. There is a catch light in the eye which gives it life. A couple of things I'll comment on. The background is out of focus but there is a bright line running up the middle which I find distracting and might suggest it be cloned out. I think a little reworking of the tones and contrast could make it much more dramatic. I don't know if it's to your taste or not. I did a quick edit to show what I mean. I cloned out the background, tweaked the bird and the rest of the image and added a vignette. Just something for your consideration. Just my 2 cents.
Regards

Greg

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mariusgroza

Hey Greg, thanks for the critique. You gave many good ideas on how to improve my editing, so I'll try this on my next photographs :). Have a nice day!

Regards,

Marius

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