old tailor

Fine image, however its too bad the main subject's in such dim light. Except for the table-top, there's too little separation of tones for my taste. If its possible, I'd suggest you go back to the tailor at a different hour or armed with reflectors or fill-in flash.

Good balance of detail in shadow as well as sunlight. This is an interesting subject, he looks serious about his work.

Good subject - but not in the best angle IMO.

 

I suggest sticking with the golden rule for his shot i.e placing the tailor round about 1/3 to the left.

 

Perhaps moving yourself a bit towards the right front of the man ?

 

As suggested by previous commenter, lighting should be appropriately adjusted.

tell me your commen't please