morophaenixmau 22 Posted January 10, 2013 Thanks for this nice colored...gift! Ciao, Maurizio. Link to comment
ruudalbers 1 Posted January 10, 2013 A really beautiful shot with very nice lighting and colours, Sina!Hartelijke groeten,Ruud. Link to comment
smaleki 0 Posted January 11, 2013 @Mau and Ruud: Many thanks for your visit and nice comments! Link to comment
smaleki 0 Posted January 15, 2013 @Pawel: many thanks for your visit and nice comment! Link to comment
gregoryl 0 Posted January 15, 2013 Hello SinaA pleasant portrait. I not quite sure what the intent is. Is this a product shot, something she makes or sells. If it is that's fine. If it isn't and it's a prop then it's too colourful and distracts attention from the subject. It all depends on the intent of the image. A couple of thoughts on the image. I might suggest working the original file to get a little detail in the hair as it disappears into the black background. I might also brighten the face a little and lower the contrast a touch on her face. There is nothing below her waist and there is no detail to recover off the screen capture again some reworking on the original you could lighten it a bit to get a little detail showing. As it is now she seems to be a torso just floating in space. Lastly I might suggest a little tighter crop to make it a bit more intimate. I did a quick edit to show what I mean. Just my thoughts, you may like it the way it is. Just my 2 cents.RegardsGreg Link to comment
smaleki 0 Posted January 18, 2013 @Gregory: many thanks for your great advises, very helpful and educating. It is a product shop but I will keep your critics for the next portraits! Link to comment
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