M..2

Denis,

  I assume you intend this as a fine art nude and not a glamour-pinup type.  If I am correct I think one should analyze this for smoothness of lines and tones.  It has problems in that there are so many textures, wrinkles and uneven lighting.  The light on her face is problematic in creating hot spots on her cheek and nose. A fill light to lighten the shadows could help.

 If I am wrong and this was meant in the glamour-pinup category, then she should be looking at the camera and making a facial expression that says she is interacting with the viewer.

Jerry

Lovely shot and lovely model Denis!

I must say that I haven't see bubble wrap used as a background very often. I like the combination and contrast of textures and the way the light sculpts her body. Her gaze out of the frame works for me here.

I must confess that I too quite like the bubble wrap b.g. and all the textural elements that juxtapose nicely with the softness of the figure. Very fine work my friend with nice control of the light too.

-r-