gregoryl 0 Posted December 12, 2012 Hello GerolamoWhat great textures and placement of elements. Except for the bits on tin it's probably how it looked a couple hundred years ago. As for critique I find it a bit flat for my taste but looking at your portfolio I guess that's your style. A couple of other nitpicks I'd like to the very top of the cross and the distant background has become pixelated I'd smooth them out, since it's in the far distance it would just look like it wasn't in the field of focus. Again it's a matter of personal taste with these things. Maybe it's exactly how you like it, but since you're asking for a critique that's mine. I did a quick edit, brightened a bit, toned it and blurred the background.I posted it here. RegardsGreg Link to comment
j_sevigny 0 Posted December 14, 2012 Nice shapes and composition. Personally, I'd like to see a little more contrast but that's just me. Maybe a darker background. Also, the crop along the top cuts really close to the point of the cross. Leave a little more room, maybe? Link to comment
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