Nephi

a very affectionate portrait. The open door provides a very inviting atmosphere, while round objects (the washing pan, the kettle, his hat), overarched by the cars' roof, form a subtle, pleasant rhythm that ties the elements together and link them to him.

Always - always level the camera!

Busy surrounding details are really competing with you objective.

Use post techniques to drive the eye - visually and tonally toward your main subject.

I have to agree with Gary, his version is a lot less busy and lets you focus on the subject better. Nice image none the less.

your proposal made me re-think my comment - and your changes. On technical level, your proposal makes sense and is correct. Especially, dodging and burning help focusing on his face.

However, to me one of the key qualities of this photo is the casualness and authenticity which is achieved (deliberately or not) by the 'street-like' esthetics. I even don't mind that the dominating lines are not parallel to the edges - slanted lines rather add to casualness.

Level or not, this is a fantastic documentary shot.  That is all that needs to be said at this point.

A lovely capture. I like the mood of the picture and the subtle lighting. Great work.

Thanks for all the comments. I appreciate your help and support.

Nancy Gail

A very nice portrait!