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Exposure Date: 2012:09:28 11:53:21;
Make: NIKON CORPORATION;
Model: NIKON D90;
ExposureTime: 1/20 s;
FNumber: f/4;
ISOSpeedRatings: 200;
ExposureProgram: Manual;
ExposureBiasValue: 0/6;
MeteringMode: Spot;
Flash: Flash did not fire;
FocalLength: 28 mm;
FocalLengthIn35mmFilm: 42 mm;
Software: Adobe Photoshop CS5 Windows;


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Hello Silvia

A nice still life. I like your composition and placement of elements. I like the texture and the toning. A couple of suggestions. I don't know what process you used to do your b&w conversion but if you were to try some filters that can drastically alter the tones, lighten greens, darken reds etc, etc. I find it to lack a bit of life if you will. I might suggest cropping a little off the top perhaps, personal preference but I find it a little to much space at top. Lastly, your light source has made an odd shaped highlight, I might try to make it more a conventional rectangular shape next time or on this image just clone it out.  I did a quick edit to show my crop suggestion and tweaked the flowers and vase to give it a bit more life. Just my 2 cents worth.

Regards

Greg

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I think this is a lovely composition. I like the overall feel of it, and the rose on the table and petals adds another dimension to it. Well done.

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A most lovely still life and a great treatment of it to give us this very fine vintage style image.  Yes, Lovely Indeed!

-r-

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silvia

really a lovely image in both the original and also gregory's rendition.  my preference would be your original as it seems just a tad lighter and also the proportion of flowers to frame seem more balanced in original. lovely piece of work.

roger

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