Memory

Please, leave your comments no matter what you think, I'll be glad to

read your opinion!

Silvia

Hello Silvia

A nice still life. I like your composition and placement of elements. I like the texture and the toning. A couple of suggestions. I don't know what process you used to do your b&w conversion but if you were to try some filters that can drastically alter the tones, lighten greens, darken reds etc, etc. I find it to lack a bit of life if you will. I might suggest cropping a little off the top perhaps, personal preference but I find it a little to much space at top. Lastly, your light source has made an odd shaped highlight, I might try to make it more a conventional rectangular shape next time or on this image just clone it out.  I did a quick edit to show my crop suggestion and tweaked the flowers and vase to give it a bit more life. Just my 2 cents worth.

Regards

Greg

I think this is a lovely composition. I like the overall feel of it, and the rose on the table and petals adds another dimension to it. Well done.

A most lovely still life and a great treatment of it to give us this very fine vintage style image.  Yes, Lovely Indeed!

-r-

Lovely ....... So gentle

silvia

really a lovely image in both the original and also gregory's rendition.  my preference would be your original as it seems just a tad lighter and also the proportion of flowers to frame seem more balanced in original. lovely piece of work.

roger

Thank you, for all your comments, I'm glad you like it! That's the point! Something beautiful to touch our souls!

Silvia