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Soledad


andrzej

Exposure Date: 2012:03:23 19:12:59;
Make: Canon;
Model: Canon EOS 50D;
Exposure Time: 1/25.0 seconds s;
FNumber: f/4.0;
ISOSpeedRatings: ISO 800;
ExposureProgram: Other;
ExposureBiasValue: 0
MeteringMode: Other;
Flash: Flash did not fire, compulsory flash mode;
FocalLength: 106.0 mm mm;
Software: Adobe Photoshop Elements 8.0 Windows;


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Nice image, Andrzej.  I like the feeling it evokes.  The post prcoessing is handled nicely IMO. Interesting intertwining and interplay of geometries as well as "human content" (the contrast between the expressions on her's suspended in a momentary reverie vs his burdened (annoyed even, or irritated) by carrying out his task). I look at this more of a solitary suspended moment (for her) than solitude (i.e. the title) per se -- a momentary respite before the wave of crowds rush in and keep the bartenders flooded for endless hours... A suggestion: the overall composition may possibly be stronger with a tighter crop horizontially above the panel that has the opening hours, unless you are purposely after that heavier "overly framed look"...anyhow, just my 2 cents.  Best, -h

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Hello Hamid, thank you very much for your visit and advices. I appreciate your comment very much. Best greetings, Andrzej

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Hi Andrzej, I like this revised version better, because it is simpler and does away with the compositionally unnecessary/distracting elements in my opinion.  (I don't think knowing the opening hours added anything to the image and having removed all the extra frames frees the image.)  I may be inclined to crop slightly (vertically) on the right side, on the right of the image of drink being served on the wall, but ultimately you have to see what you like, of course.  One last comment, in the revised version, the shadows are too dark, if you check her hair and his face vs the original, you will see what I mean. You are losing too much detail there that may be nice to recuperate.  hope this helps, -h

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