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taken with 24n to 70 and 50mm/f2.8/iso 1000 and on tripod used window light

tried to get a tack sharp focus

any advise appreciated

I think it is good. What does the mom think? That's the important part.

Things to think about: 1) It might be cropped to tightly. I would like to see more of the kids and possibly mom's encircling arm. 8x10 proportions would cut out some space you don't need at right. 2) f/2.8 is great for individual portraits, but with groups it is tough. It seems the like the kid at left is in sharper focus than the woman, perhaps because of the limited depth of field. The lighting is really good on that child, by the way. 3) I don't love the background. Maybe bringing them forward a bit would help obscure it even more.

Just free advice that may be worth less than you paid for it...

maravillosa y simpatica toma fotografica.

saludos

contecon

It does not get much better! Beautiful shot.