Tent guard

Very nice shot.  The tonal elements set a very somber mood.  The tree, the pole and the sun work well - It took a few moments to notice the tent and the car :)  Thanks for sharing!

-chris

Very nice moment.

Interesting photo.

There are just few objects that you can organize just a little bit different.It is hard to critique black and white photography , I am not sure what your intentions were and sometimes just stepping away from the rules will create a great work, nevertheless I will try.

We have:

sun,sky,electric poll, wires, trees, person with car and tent.

You want to organize those elements in such way that it will make an impact and be tidy.

By walking towards the place or away, by walking to the right a left, standing high or using proper lens you can move all those objects , that I call elements sometimes.

First I would be very careful with the wires touching the trees, this is easy at the same time be careful that the sun will not get stuck in between the wires and do not keep it central.

Everything else is great.

If you have energy go back to this place and do what I have suggested and this will produce great black and white photography

Chris & Rafal

Thanks for stopping by.

Rafal

I really appreciated your comments and thoughts,

i will be working with my planning and organization.

I've just got a new favorite B/W photographer.

Thanks for your time

Best regards

/RA