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Cropped, sharpened, adjusted contrast.


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See what happens when you make this request Bridget? Lots of rates and no comments. Ah well, I guess I get to be the first.

 

Obviously, I can't look at this without also thinking of your other image of this busker. This is obviously a bit less dynamic in terms of the pose but the exposure and tonality is great. My only small suggestion would be to dodge out her hair a bit to the left of her face to see of you can get a little bit of detail, but I otherwise like the image a lot. In comparison to the other one, I assume she's playing a ballad here, eh? Its very nice work. I'm getting impressed with how your work on tonal range is coming along. Its getting better and better.

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as Andy mentioned about her hair. I would try to cut her out of the picture and change the background to a very busy,dark background by applying movement blur. This would make a hard contrast to her very calm,melancholic face expression ;-)
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for me the cropping is a little too tight.. i would leave some more on the right side if there is no distraction, but the continuity of the wall
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Very nice capture Bridget, well done...not too tight a crop IMO. :)

Not sure about darkening her background, you might lose her a bit.

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