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Please critique this one, I hope i can learn from all of you

The idea is fine but there's a couple of things which detract from it for me. The figure's head needs a little more space at the top of the frame. Also at the top of the frame, there's a dark object just intruding. I find that a bit disconcerting. Apart from that it's a pleasant enough image in my opinion.

Yes you are absolutely right i should give the person more room in this picture, tnx for comment

Good idea, but I think the composition could be improved. The figure is to close to the edge of the frame....