Take Off-ering

Looking for critique...don't hold back. This was my first attempt at a

fashion shoot. The designer wanted edgy as well as beauty.

Model was not a professional, she was a friend of the designer, but a real

sport standing on a ledge in heels :)

Its a good start, I would like to remove some of the "light dots" added in the post and you have the shoes more or less as the main attention point in the shoot but I guess the designer has made the cloths? the eye (or the brain to be more specific) looks for light and contrast. Right now that is the spot behind her head and her shoes with a small change in the post process you make the clothes more prominent in the shoot.

Best regards Tore

a photographer will be remembered and valued for creating powerful subject interest, and doing it without using photoshop tricks and crazy edits, will be their best work...
As many people, and myself included, will look at this and say, what are all the white dots for?