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I do like this, the exposure is good, I like the right side placement, but...one tiny thing is that I personally think I'd like to see is the background uniformly black behind her; it looks like it gets a little washed out. Or, if trying to ceate more of a gradient look, start out closer to the top center working to a dark gray on the right.

I like the composition and the crop makes it perfect. I had the same thought as David - I'd preferred the uniform dark background.

But anyway - the photo, here pose and the negative space is a very strong concept. congrats - focus

I think you would have a stronger image by cropping out 2/3 of the image that has no information or reason for being.  Your model has nice lighting and decent "S" curve.

Thank you very much.

Yes, the second crop is such a much more powerful image. Your original would be great if it were for an ad, with the messaging in that big spot of nothing. 

Yes!  The cropped image is really very good.