Lived in face - sepia tone version - now cropped

Changed to sepia tone, because original colours looked odd, but were almost as seen (the subject did look a funny colour - i.e. weather beaten!).

 

What do you think?

Comments please

It's well observed but I think that the diagonal line across the top distracts attention from the face. Perhaps you should crop it tight above the head to eliminate that.

I tend to agree with the previous comment. Although I like the lines of the shoulders at the bottom in this composition, the background is enormously distracting and relatively easily removed by doing a tight crop on the face - a face that I find very interesting.

I see a hard life, but still a man who like life !

much better!