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This picture was done in a aquatic ambience and with natural light

and a vinyl.

It doesn't work for me aesthetically. If the bottom right object were further left it might at least have acted as a focal point to balance the object on the left but as it stands there's nothing here to take my interest.

As an abstract it's verging on very fine. But, the other commentor is right; there's something off about the composition. Can't put my finger on it, but I like what you were after here. Just wish it were slightly different in execution?!