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Photograph on a timer by a 19 y/o photographer new to people

photography exploring control in relationships and the lustful submission

some women feel towards this kind of domination.

Very distasteful !

You should learn the lighting, acting, poses, composition. This is still crap. 

Personally i   think that      the 2 previous comments are     distasteful. this   photo  is   interesting  with good  light ,gorgeous people and technically  well done. keep shooting .if you dont have a problem with the  subject matter than thats all  that matters here.    i  love it.

Domination to submission.

Photograph on a timer by a 19 y/o photographer new to people photography exploring control in relationships and the lustful submission some women feel towards this kind of domination.

Interesting concept. Overtly disclosed, also.

There was, a while ago, another Photographer here at Photonet who pursued a very similar niche genre of this Portraiture Style: though she explored a Solo Setting and not a Two Person Set.

There was one Photo she made which I considered ‘genius’ and I scored it a perfect 7/7 - a very rare condition from me. Unfortunately she has deleted it from viewing.

This is an interesting course you have chosen – it will be interesting to see if you post more of this genre – and if you improve the technique.  

There are many technical issues one might seek to critique – but that’s for another time: and it is better for me to focus my comments on what I see was achieved and what fell short of the mark, apropos the Artist's Vision.

It occurs to me this shot was is too rushed.

The Female in NOT completely ‘there’.

She is hesitant – perhaps waiting for the shutter release, certainly she is pre-occupied and there is far too much going on, in her brain box of HER initiation, not his.

The Man just misses also – it occurs there is some tentativeness in his grasp.

Hair is pretty strong – and it doesn’t look like he has a strong a grip as possible.

He certainly is NOT pulling upwards – that ‘tell’ is in his upper arm flexion (or lack of it).

Interesting work.

By no means is it 'crap'. 

WW