Julie

Excellent work! 6

What a beautiful woman and well taken too

This is a technically nice image and she has beautiful eyes, makeup, and earrings.  The straight torso and the rounded shoulders knock the glamor edge off this portrait for me.  I am uploading my preference for this image.  I reduced the roundness of her left shoulder and tilted the composition to get the S curve going.  I hope this is helpful.  Good luck.

Thanks all for your comments. John you have transformed the image into a glamorous one. Never imagined it would lift the image so much. Wonderful . . .lots of improvement!!! You also did a great job recreating her left shoulder and arm in the process as well. Thank you so much...you have thought me a very important lesson today. 

Best regards to all . . .John