allenahale 0 Posted September 28, 2011 Hung some sheets in the livingroom to take some photos with SB-600. Comments and suggestions are appreciated. Thank you for your time and consideration' Link to comment
htarragon 8 Posted September 29, 2011 Nice pose and expression. But:1. She's too close to the background so you're getting a shadow on the wall2. Light is head on so you;ve got harsh shadows under her fingers and her chin.3. There's no modeling to her face because the light is head on and she is sitting square to the camera.4. The light is flat and harsh - needs to be dialed down and moved to the side.5. It looks like the focus point is on her hair coming in front of her shoulder rather than her eyes.6. The comb should not be there. The picture with the dark background is much better. Link to comment
lintrathen 15 Posted September 29, 2011 ...... Howards points here are quite valid and I have tried to address some of them in my attachment.A crop and slight sharpening is all I did. I think the change in skin tones may have come via the download and upload process.Regards Link to comment
allenahale 0 Posted September 30, 2011 Thank you Grayham for your comments and more importantly your time in tweaking my photograph. Photography for me is a learning experience and with input like yours it is a pleasant and more rewarding experience. Allen Link to comment
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