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Brick Wall Art

tamaramar

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Artist: TaMara;
Exposure Date: 2011:08:27 14:14:34;
Copyright: All rights reserved by Tamara Martoussevitch;
Make: NIKON CORPORATION;
Model: NIKON D7000;
ExposureTime: 1/320 s;
FNumber: f/8;
ISOSpeedRatings: 200;
ExposureProgram: Manual;
ExposureBiasValue: -2/6;
MeteringMode: Pattern;
Flash: Flash did not fire, compulsory flash mode;
FocalLength: 50 mm;
FocalLengthIn35mmFilm: 75 mm;
Software: Adobe Photoshop CS5 Windows;

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Pierre Dumas

This image is based on the geometrical perfection Tamara and should be really geometrically perfect! The bottom line shows leaning to the right, only that should be corrected! It's easy!

Best regards!

PDE

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jpk

Pierre is right, the brick lines should be parallel to frame edges.

Beside this highlights are grey, not white - it doesn't look good. And the shadow, which is one of the most important elements of the composition definitely should not be cut..

Regards.

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tamaramar

thank you very much for your constructive critique. I worked on it and the result is attached - do you mind to check it please. I managed even to reconstruct the circle of the shadow, but this is the picture I took. Thank you again, My best regards, Tamara

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