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Toned


scottmartinez

Exposure Date: 2011:09:01 16:25:43;
Make: NIKON CORPORATION;
Model: NIKON D700;
ExposureTime: 1/200 s;
FNumber: f/2.2;
ISOSpeedRatings: 100;
ExposureProgram: Manual;
ExposureBiasValue: 0;
MeteringMode: Spot;
Flash: Flash did not fire;
FocalLength: 50 mm;
Software: Adobe Photoshop Lightroom 3.4.1;


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I have been working on black and white conversion in Lightroom trying to

get the images to be a least respectable to the medium. I added a bit of

tone to this one. Comments welcome!

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I like the warmer tint to this one, straight black and white might bring out a more somber expression. The photo is good, but the pose is a bit stiff in my opinion for dancers... When one thinks of ballet they think of the grace of the dancers.  One a more side note if this cropped in Lightroom, I would go back and give a little more room on the top; her shoulder and rear become the focal points the way this is cropped now.

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The dancer is improvising and moving in this image. I've been having the dancer move and free dance rather than try to get the same pose. I think it was a lucky catch to get the expression and both eyes as if I was shooting a portrait. The interesting note was I shot with a 50mm to move in and get some close ups. I wondered what sorts of distortion I would get since I shoot dancers at up to 200mm. It made the long arms longer. I find the lengthening interesting, so I put it up. With dance and ballet, there is always the lines. Musical, beautiful, and sometime powerful. Where do the lines take your eye. 

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In general I think you've succeeded nicely with the B&W conversion...the tones and textures are very rich....the image itself is nice, though I don't like that her left hand is partially cut off...nice pose and expressionthough...and also nicely lit.  Also just a personal nit...your signature banner overpowers the image...not sure if this is designed for an advertising campaign or not...if so it might be more appropriate. 

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