This is where the wild things are

This was my first portrait shoot! please give me anything bad and good! I

would love to know how the lighting is on it. :)

This is so unique , I really love the background . You did a very good job

I think this is a great start Sydney, You definitely have a nice spark of creativity. Welcome to PN. I am looking forward to seeing more of your work.

Kind Regards, Todd

Sydney,

 Welcome to the photography of female face and form.

 My first suggestion is that a vertical crop would have worked well to keep the top of her head in the picture.

 My second suggestion is to be sure you have a signed model release on hand, as well as copies of her id,  to prove she is of legal age for such photos.  To be quite honest she looks about 13-14 years old.  If she is 18 or older, do suggest to her that she could have a wonderful career modeling for teenage fashions. An older model who looks younger than 18 is a great boon to those who need younger models as she can work without a parent present.

Regards,

Jerry

I think the lighting is pretty good, although I would have had the light down a bit, I find the picture looks a little shadowed on the eyes, although that could be the makeup.

Overall a very nice picture.