Jump to content

Still Life with heather


anastasia_k2

Exposure Date: 2011:08:07 16:45:40;
Make: NIKON CORPORATION;
Model: NIKON D40;
ExposureTime: 0.4 s;
FNumber: f/4.8;
ISOSpeedRatings: 200;
ExposureProgram: Manual;
ExposureBiasValue: -8/6;
MeteringMode: Pattern;
Flash: Flash did not fire;
FocalLength: 35 mm;
Software: Adobe Photoshop CS3 Windows;


From the category:

Studio

· 29,689 images
  • 29,689 images
  • 100,112 image comments


Recommended Comments

Beautiful natural lighting. Regarding composition in my honest opinion you have too much at the bottom and too little at the top.  The round object at the right of the vase it is not helping so I would remove it as well as a cleaner base. I also would cover the rest of the base (bottom left hand corner). Hope that helps.

Regards,

Joe

Link to comment

I was pretty much going to say exactly what Joseph Marsh said.  The lighting is beautiful, the muted tones are fantastic, but there is too much of that cloth in the lower 1/3 of the picture, and the light reflection on the bottom right corner is distracting.  You could *almost* get a square crop out of this. I would also try to get rid of the round object (is it an apple?) and the clump of plant material at the middle right hand edge of the frame.  I don't mind the scattered detritus, but that clump right at the edge of the frame is also a distraction. The table leg on the lower left should go also.  But again, lots of great light, tones, and the shape of the heather is great, the tones of the vase and wall are fantastic.

Link to comment

Create an account or sign in to comment

You need to be a member in order to leave a comment

Create an account

Sign up for a new account in our community. It's easy!

Register a new account

Sign in

Already have an account? Sign in here.

Sign In Now
×
×
  • Create New...