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Lan,

I feel there are some very nice elements to this shot. I really like the upper portion a lot. I love the light and shadows on the face, it shows contours nicely and just enough of the lips to provide sensual mystery - really great. The lighting below the face is just a little too hot in the breast area - if it was toned down a little it would be a better match to the face. THere is a slight tint of green to it but it seems to work for me. Compositionally the bottom half isn't working for me and I can't say exactly why, maybe it is a little too busy and somehow doesn't match the simplicity of the upper half. I think if you cropped the bottom out to just above her left thumb the composition remains simple and I think more interesting. I hope these comments helped in some way.

Best Regards,

Peter