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I like the lines of this. I thought a 4x5 crop eliminating some of the bottom black free space would make for a stronger presentation.

I hope you don't mind this type of feedback.

Best Regards

Beautiful work with this wonderful architectural detail. Great work with light and shadow. I like the dark area in the bottom side, looks better and more elegant in my opinion and is a balance for overall composition.

It builds a function of angle.

All "gravity" is in it on the upper left. I like the rays coming from the top left and clarity within the circle and the dark lines in "fan" that come out of there, so that darker zone giving contrast to the image.

I like what goes on in the background. It is important because it is a shadow of the same story that goes on. It gives more richness to the figure.

The choice of B & W is appropriate.

But I think this photo should not be here but in "abstract ".
One can assume that they are a ceiling, but never sure ...

Regards,

M

... and I agree with the observation of James.
Would indicate the white part. More balance!

M

thank you for your comments, crop is good idea, i uploaded one more version

As an architectural abstract I like this I lot. I do prefer the cropped version though. All that black space pulls attention away from the photo