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Hi, I am not an expert, but let me give it a try: The retouch on the skin is done very nicely. I also like how the face is splitted into a bright and a dark half.

But the case in the BG (ans also the helmet) is somewhat distracting. Furthermore, the picture is a little tilted, but this is easy to fix. Nice portrait, though.

Best regards, Alex

Nivaldo,  Every picture tells a story.  However the photographer should give it a title to give us a hint of what it is about.  Otherwise we are left guessing.

Jerry

Beautiful model and great use of lighting. Very nice skin tones and expression. The verticals should be arranged by a little rotation and the yellow object in the background is distracting. Otherwise it's a beautiful image. Congrats.

I agree with the above said - the backgroung and the cropped arm and the composition itself are nonsese. The model is wonderful.