End of the Line

John,

Interesting subject, but not a very compelling photograph (to me).  The lighting is not flattering, looks like midday.  The tall weed is distracting,and the short grass in the foreground detracts from the "abandoned" "decaying" look.  It looks semi-mowed, which suggests nearby human activity, which contrasts to the aging train.  I'd suggest going back in different lighting situations (early or late day), or getting closer and focusing on some  detail of the car itself (e.g. rivits around a rotted window, rusty wheels, etc.).  You might try making it a black and white photo, adding more contrast, or taking some interior shots.

I know it's tough to be there in perfect light, and most times you just have to do the best you can whith what's there when you find it.  I hope I haven't offended you, just trying to be helpful.

By the looks of the clouds you really had your work cut out to pull off this shot.  Assuming you were at liberty to walk all around the car and go inside, it is these lighting conditions when you want to explore different perspectives.  I know what it is like to find a cool subject but can only spare a few minutes at the location with clouds to the horizon in all directions.  Just make the most of the situation and mark your map for a potential re-visit.  Thanks for sharing.

PDE

It was a difficult shoot. Private property and mud from a rain the night before. The interior was a mess - large holes in the floors. I may go back and try again and hope for more favorable conditions. Thanks again for your time.

John