Tanja

Hello,

 

my first try here:-)

 

Volker

Very nicely done. Great eyes. One can see the intensity in her face though much of her face is hidden. Toning works well also

6/7

Welcome. Great Picture!

Exellent!

 

The image is quite dark, which makes it a bit dull. If there would have been more contrast in it (for example, make the white in the eyes much whiter), the eyes would capture the attention more.

 

To explain what I mean: In the place where I'm doing a photography course, there's also a photo with almost the same subject on the wall. On that photo, there's a beam of light coming from the side going over the eyes. The attention is immediately drawn to the eyes, which makes it a much more impressive photo than yours.

 

It's a phantastique portrait. Nice lady and perfect craftmansship!

very good work.please looking my picture.

Very good and exiting photo! very well done.

Great portrait, very emotional.

Good photograph. But, lighting is very flat and so, can look a bit drab. More light on/around the eyes might make a difference.