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Hi Aswar:

What a difference! I'm no longer looking at the beetle! (well, maybe just a little). I would get in closer to frame the model rather than the car if she is the object of attention. The whole beetle still draws my eye away from her.

Regards, John.

 

I like your Asian model - also I prefer the rounded VW to the two wheels motorcycle - hope you find more creative props for showing her talent to us

I never get the whole babe-with-car thing.  Neither one tends to wear the other well as an accessory.  At best, this type of picture seems to set up a distracting competition between the two objects of desire; more often, one or both is posed very disadvantageously.  It always seems to add up to less than the sum of its parts; and then there's the disturbing subtext of the implied similarity in how we respond to the two objects.  Maybe it would help if the model behaved as if the car were something more than a prop, but they never seem to do so.  Here, the model shows no awareness of the car at all.

 

To assess it more technically, the model is very cute but I would like some fill light around her left eye, and also, her legs are set up so her left calf looks much slimmer than the other; I would have moved her left foot back so that it didn't press against and bulge out the right calf.

 

Aswar...  A beautiful bug and the model is nice too ;-)... Mike