Ely ... running late

very beautiful.  Your model does well to relax her face with little visible strain. 

in terms of composition this is a unique and well executed shot. I agree, given how you have composed your model a more relaxed facial expression (smile/looking up etc... as a thought) would make the whole scene more natural.

that said its original and appealing to an otherwise common portrait here in PN. well done

Good work, I like the action, the unusualness, the DOF. Good capture.

Thanks to each of you for taking time to view and critique this image. Looking forward, for more feedback from P.N members. 

regards to all

JV

This is an amazing capture...very quirky and original...it has a very good commercial feel and I would not be surprised to see this in any of the popular fashion magazines....beautiful tones and textures, nice natural lighting but the intensity in her gaze really makes this stand out.  Typically I'm not crazy about bold watermarks or labels but here it seems to fit the commercial feel of this image....nicely captured.

Your pictures are terrific. I like your angle of composition and choice of shutter speed. You've captured the model with clarity, while the angle and motion of the splash pattern (and even the angle of her foot sole) provide a dynamism and a wonderful sense of motion.