Jessie (22)

Interesting B&W shot, Alain ... expressive look. I like how you composed it ... Regards

I agree with the previous poster -- nice composition. I like how the half-open window and placement of the model draws attention to her very dramatic eyes. I normally wouldn't care for the lack of detail in the shadows on the lower and mid-left, but in this case I think the lack of detail there highlights the details of the model. 

I like her expression together with the composition too, it creates a"mood" in the shoot. Great work.

Best regards Tore

I like the half open window for two reasons, first it acts as formal aesthetic element and leads my eyes. Second it makes me wonder about the story behind this scene, makes for mystery - very good.