wmc718 3 Posted February 4, 2011 Hi Francois,Nice shot! Personally, I would like it better rendered as a B&W rather than using the warm light of your incadescent lighitng, but that's just me. Link to comment
starvy 7 Posted February 6, 2011 Excellent use of the corner and mirror.I have two issues - firstly, the fluorescent light is rather flat. Such a beautiful composition should be full of simplicity, which means high contrast and more concentration on white balance. As someone had suggested above, a black and white would be rather interesting and create a more intense mood.Secondly, the pillow behind and in front of her are a little distracting. For this composition to achieve Zen, which I believe it is capable of, we need to see less of the bed, pillows and even her legs. Link to comment
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