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Hello, i am new to film photography, had a few basic lessons by

photographer friends. Would love to hear some comments from other

professionals to improve my skill. Photo is fully unmodified, film i used

was a Kodak 400VC 120, daylight f2,8 shutter speed 15. No filters were

used, raw rolleiflex 2,8E planar lens.

Thank you

Nice job with the color and focus (I love the depth of field on the floor in the foreground and the wall in the background,) but you may want to watch what is happening in the background a little more carefully. The table (?) and the lamp are running through your product and distract the viewer from the most important thing in the image - the product. The background objects do form a nice diagonal, but it might be better if they weren't right behind the corner of the box. Nicely crisp and clean image -

Mark

Now you mentioned it, i never realise it myself because as a beginner i put all my attention to make sure the focusing is correct. 

Learnt a lesson

Thanks Mark!

Simple but very good idea&result!

I like it; good focus! The background doesn't bother me at all - in fact, I like it because it gives a story to the photo. Maybe shot from another angle, like Mark said, would give it a better appearance but still it is a really good shot with really nice lighting. I like the soft colors too. Thank you for sharing. :)