johnborg 0 Posted November 9, 2010 Your comments/critiques most appreciated. Thank you. Link to comment
Guest Guest Posted November 9, 2010 I really like this shot John. The lighting is very good, with a good ratio to provide good modeling.A suggestion. The high values on the left side of her face seem a little high to me. By using PS curves, I dropped them a little bit, providing even better modeling.What do you think? Link to comment
options 0 Posted November 9, 2010 Jeeez John this one is fantastic capture. I love the fact the eyes are tack sharp. At first I thought I saw a catch light but realized I was looking at the reflection of you guys in her eyes. Nice B&W conversion as well. I don't mind the light on the left hand side (right of her face). Your version makes her skin silky smooth as the darker version makes her skin a bit textured.Although...... there is quite a bit of lens distortion on the left and topside of the photo...... JUST KIDDDING!!!Great shot. Link to comment
hamidfarzandian 0 Posted November 9, 2010 Really wins all rates! Top portrait shot, unbeatable with respect to compo, light, tones, and focus. I like also the masterful and superb pose, which apt here. Bravo.Hamid. Link to comment
Guest Guest Posted November 9, 2010 Very nice portraiture work John,excellent pose,beautiful girl,the tonality and sharpness of the eyes are exceptional,lovely image,regards,Harry Link to comment
Pierre Dumas 306 Posted November 9, 2010 So sensual, so beautiful! I don't see any shortcomings! Bravo John!PDE Link to comment
esteban Rios 18 Posted November 10, 2010 John, congratulations for this excellent portrait, I love the post-processing and softness, nice pose and extraordinary work in her beautiful eyes.I can see two talents, yours and her. 7 Link to comment
charlieboy007 0 Posted November 10, 2010 Hi John you did a very good job here and the model as well, but I agree with Scott Murphy.........Vgood Link to comment
johnborg 0 Posted November 10, 2010 Thanks all guys! I appreciate all your comments and suggestions. Scott thanks for taking your time to work on the picture suggesting an improvement. My original interpretation was to render pale soft skin, as most girls prefer this!!. But after seeing your interpretation, I must admit it looks bolder and with more punch. I really like it as the modelling of the face looks better. Best wishes to all my friends! Link to comment
niki3 3 Posted November 10, 2010 i like this portrait, expecially the focus on her eyes. rate 6 Link to comment
richard hans 0 Posted November 10, 2010 Such a graceful & charming portrait with soft light, smooth skin tone, great contrast, crisp sharpness for crystal eyes, nicely attitude & expression, very well executed, John! Best regards Link to comment
GailAnthonyHarmer 6 Posted November 14, 2010 I keep coming back to this model....she is one of the most natural and sensual of them all I think. Beautiful eyes, skin, bone structure...a true beauty. Very nice portrait John. Link to comment
clemsonguy 0 Posted November 15, 2010 Nicely done. Beautifully composed and captured. Link to comment
krpradu 125 Posted November 16, 2010 Exccellent using of light ,I like your version,best regards. Link to comment
johnborg 0 Posted November 17, 2010 Thanks all for your comments and contributions. So much appreciated. Rico . . . as a matter of interest I'm uploading a shot during the shooting depicting the rest of the guys you mentioned :) I'm on the far left of the photo! Link to comment
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